not bad.. not bad
ok that was amusing. its a catchy tune too, i liked that. but dont get all high and mighty on that tune, dont use it over and over, it could and probably will get old fast.
the background detail was ok, could use a touch here or there but your characters are what you should be concentrating on, they ARE the main focus after all. work on more detail, unless u intended to have goo ppl than ok.
overall i liked it. i would say protect, even though its through judgment already.