random... yeah
it was true to its title ill give ya that much, but thats all ill give. Next time when you "practice", make sure its actually worth subbmitting next time, please and thanks.
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random... yeah
it was true to its title ill give ya that much, but thats all ill give. Next time when you "practice", make sure its actually worth subbmitting next time, please and thanks.
That's a reason why I didn't write "vote 5" or "protect it". I wanted NG to decide if it passes or not. I'm happy NG decided to keep it. Next submission will probably be a karaoke. And the one after the karaoke will definitly be worth submitting. Thanks for reviewing.
lol
try submitting this again.. but next time, INCLUDE the loader.
Ok I'll try to add a preloader but I hope it doesn't start messing up like all of my other ones do.
good... good
you had something going, then you ruined it by adding the slaughter, i think you shouldhave at least gone on a little bit further with them adding more and more important things to the pot.
but otherwise not bad, id say it deservers to pass.
That is an interesting take, I suppose I'd like if you went even further. How would you of changed this animation? If not ended with slaughter how would it be ended in a way that you would not consider "ruin"? I'm assuming you're not just saying that I should of just had them kept adding more to the bet and then have it end abruptly when they no longer have anything to add.
pretty good
Its not bad, in fact.. i like it, as i voted, and pretty much sums up how i like this movie.
it was a bit slow paced, but im more into faster paced movies. some dialog would help with the storyline. other than that.. its not bad.. DEFINATLEY DOESNT DISERVE TO GET BLAMMED. as for me, i dont hink it diserves front but, who knows...
Slowness and absence of dialogues reflected from the very beginning.
not bad.. not bad
ok that was amusing. its a catchy tune too, i liked that. but dont get all high and mighty on that tune, dont use it over and over, it could and probably will get old fast.
the background detail was ok, could use a touch here or there but your characters are what you should be concentrating on, they ARE the main focus after all. work on more detail, unless u intended to have goo ppl than ok.
overall i liked it. i would say protect, even though its through judgment already.
Actually that wasn't the song used over again, it was one song. Thanx for reviewing! =)
huh?
this is ur 25th submision? i would think u would have produced something better than an old joke and, well idk what the rest was but cmon man, for ur 25th it should be pretty decent.
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